Past Writer, Present Writer
With over half a year of writing these letters, I am taking the time to review the differences in my writing between the past and present. I havenāt noticed a difference in writing quality, to my dismay, but Iāve learned something much more valuable. Iāve learned the value of editing. Before, I thought editing was a cumbersome and not necessary. āShouldnāt everyone understand my stream of consciousness?ā It turns out, no, the reader cannot. When I went back to re-read my writing, I realized I couldnāt read it. I had to think of the context in which I wrote it in to determine what I was trying to say.
Programming helped build part of this muscle. For over a year, Iāve been reading and reviewing my code, and Iāve noticed holes everywhere. As I learn how to become a pragmatic developer, I notice the code I wrote in the past just isnāt up to my standards today. And the code I write today wonāt be at the standards that I hope for tomorrow. With writing, I strive for the same things. I want it to be legible for the intended audience with hopes that they will understand my point of view.
It felt embarrassing having my audience read such verbose verbiage. For the past month, Iāve tried to cut back on using adverbs and other modifiers. Iāve scrutinized words such as āonlyā, āveryā, and ājustā and tried to cut them out. Now when I read through my writing, I immediately cut those things out as soon as I can.
I pass my essays through the Hemingway App to detect awkward sentences. For example, the app can detect passive voice and difficult to read sentences. In grade school, most of us learned to avoid these techniques. I didnāt comprehend these things until I started recognizing them as mistakes. When I had a friend edit my writing, I learned that itās hard to recognize these things on your own. Speaking of editors, if you would like to help edit these in the future, reach out to me.
When I read writing from some of my favorite authors, Iām awed by their clarity and narration. I aim myself for that target, but Iām not quite there yet. I will need to deliberately practice more, but I recognize that Iām making progress. Also, I still loads to say, so Iām not going to quit writing anytime soon.